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I Promise
Contributed by
smiley_jennyxoxo
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Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 11:28:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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I promise to never cut
But you still keep your heart shut
I promise to never cheat again
I never want to hurt you again
When you hurt, I can feel your pain
Its the one thing that keeps me humane
I truly care for you, as we are one
I pray that we may set a union
Between our hearts and our minds
I realized that Ive been unkind
How I broke your heart apart
I want to help reset those parts
For I have caused all the damage
Im sure that inside you have a passage
To your trust, can you please open
The door to it again, I have broken
All the ties that we once had
Since without your light, Im sad
I hope you may forgive me for
What I did, and Ill keep the promises in my core
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smiley_jennyxoxo
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2005-05-01 11:28:53]
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Re: I Promise
(User Rating: 1 )
by apriloquinn on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 10:43:39 PM AEST
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i think that you may be trying to hard to make your poetry rhyme. Sometimes. the words come out more smooth and sound better if they don't rhyme. It was still touching though. Good effort.
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