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all the dead roses
Contributed by
all_the_dead_roses
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Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 02:14:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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How could it be over
how could it end
so many I love you's
for a heart to mend
you said it was everything
you meant the world to me
4 1/2 years of perfection
now at an end, making my heart bleed
how could this happen
i can't forget tomorrow
we had so many dreams
now nothing to show
I kept the roses
I kept the kiss
cupid shot
but how could he miss
The tears cascade slowly
down my face so much more
as all the dead roses
fall to the floor....
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Re: all the dead roses
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by pixie on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 02:22:02 PM AEST
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deep and emotional write, I can relate to this very well as I broek up with my boyfriend of nearly 3 years, we did manage to sort it out and I hope that one day you will be able to love again,
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Re: all the dead roses
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 02:24:54 PM AEST
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beautifully sad...... warm welcome to ypdc, i look forward to more of your poetry:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: all the dead roses
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by Archie on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 02:55:03 PM AEST
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| Great poem. I hope you feel better. |
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Re: all the dead roses
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 03:48:03 PM AEST
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| wounderfully written poem,sadly the world can be that crurel of sending people into our lifes ,then have them walk out of our lifes. |
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Re: all the dead roses
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 11:45:50 PM AEST
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things end...
its how we deal with it that counts..
your write so speaks to me Roses..
(ya posted this a few weeks ago...Im catchin' up..lol)
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Re: all the dead roses
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by Doriens_Picture on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:46:26 PM AEST
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you do reminde me alot of two of my girls ladyfawn and ofcouse my pixie
all of you think too little of your selves and dont know just how amazing you three are
this is a great write
you should have joined the site earlier |
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Re: all the dead roses
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by hellsfallenangel on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 08:32:59 AM AEST
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its good and i know how u feel well g2g bye
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