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Far Longer Than Forever...
Contributed by
mina-1
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Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:37:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I'll love you far longer than forever
My heart shall remain true
For my burning desires
Yearn only for you
Destiny sent you my way
We have a strong bond
A destined path to happiness
To last a lifetime and beyond
I close my eyes and dream
I am where you are
Sharing our beautiful love
Under the cascading stars
As constant as the stars
My love for you shall glow
With tender loving thoughts
My love for you shall flow
Close your eyes and dream baby
I'll be right where you are
Laying desirably next to you
Making love under the stars
So far longer than forever
My love for you will remain true
Waiting for the right time
Until I'm finally next to you
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mina-1
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2005-05-01 17:37:08]
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Re: Far Longer Than Forever...
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by Archie on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:50:12 PM AEST
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| Great poem. I bet this person will be greatly inspired when he reads this. |
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Re: Far Longer Than Forever...
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 06:15:00 PM AEST
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Sue my dear, this was so touching, I felt good bumps!
How touching, and sincere, you have a way with words, and convey them well.
You did yourself proud on this one.
Lucky fellow that you wrote this for.
Warm Love
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Re: Far Longer Than Forever...
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by dvsnme816 on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 10:51:02 PM AEST
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Wow Sue,
I was greatly inspired by this poem ;). I am proud to have read that poem and it makes me wanna find the perfect words to match the poem persona. I will never be able to match it, such subtle and quite impressing poem. Keep it up Sue, I bet the "lucky guy" knows how you feel. Great poem, sincerely.
XOXOXO
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Re: Far Longer Than Forever...
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 11:43:29 PM AEST
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GOD,WAS THAT BEAUTIFUL & ROMANTIC!
A 5 HUNDRED STARS AS FAR AS I'M CONCERNED!! THIS CAPTURES YOUR HEART & YOU JUST DON'T WANNA LET GO!!! IT KEEPS YOU CAUGHT UP IN THE MOMENT,LINE BY LINE!!!! I LOVED IT MINA!!!!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!!! |
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Re: Far Longer Than Forever...
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 12:20:20 AM AEST
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awsome write i am sure he will love this.
well done. |
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Re: Far Longer Than Forever...
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 12:32:37 AM AEST
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truely beautiful and romantic sue, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Far Longer Than Forever...
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by emystar on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 02:03:53 AM AEST
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Beautifull.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Far Longer Than Forever...
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 03:19:14 AM AEST
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what a beautiful write. Perfection in every single way.
Loved it.
Jane~ |
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Re: Far Longer Than Forever...
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by venkat on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 06:46:16 AM AEST
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| Wow...its quite alluring..so sweet and so beautifully done..Hi, Romantic Lady.he is a lucky man for he won your love .:-)venkat |
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Re: Far Longer Than Forever...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 03:20:11 PM AEST
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Beautiful, romantic and perfectly written!!!
Sue , this is breathetaking ,
hugs
Leia |
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Re: Far Longer Than Forever...
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by sride686 on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:36:39 PM AEST
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Great write again Sue but what’s new. Your work gets better with ever piece I read. This write has so much love and passion in it. It really draws you in and makes you feel all warm in side to read of this strong love and emotions you have for a very lucky guy. Take care my friend….Steve
Close your eyes and dream baby
I'll be right where you are
Laying desirably next to you
Making love under the stars
Awesome write and it was very well read Sue. |
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Re: Far Longer Than Forever...
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 04:33:49 PM AEST
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Oh Sue..I wish I had written this!!! It is absolutely stunning...and flawless... It kind of says what I think about a certain friend... Thank you for sharing this..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Far Longer Than Forever...
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 11:03:05 AM AEST
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This brought tear to my eyes so very beautiful
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Far Longer Than Forever...
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 11:03:13 AM AEST
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This brought tears to my eyes so very beautiful
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Far Longer Than Forever...
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 11:20:48 PM AEST
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This is so romantically beautiful.
Scott |
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