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Inroads
Contributed by
ooniegirl
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Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
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oops
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One day
I looked up
from the fortress
which was my world
and saw you
peering
cautiously, curiously,
over my far-reaching walls.
I sent you away
and yet you returned,
determined,
and attempted to clamour
up and over.
Tenatively, this time,
I let you in
and you stayed
to help me tear down those walls
perhaps poorly constructed
in the first place.
Copyright ©
ooniegirl
... [
2002-12-27 05:00:00]
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Re: Inroads
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by wordsy on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 02:26:47 PM AEST
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The walls built within are stronger by far than any prison bars.
Words well woven,
wordsy. |
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Re: Inroads
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by thorns on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 03:21:34 AM AEST
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| walls construted out of fear. and as Yoda tells us, fear is the path to the Dark Side... :) really enjoyed this peice. |
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