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Skin Deep
Contributed by
smilychicaa
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Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:51:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Breath after breath, the air is getting colder
and night after night, I'm feeling much older
So write in your diary what you think about me, keep it locked so no one can see----
You're a sight for sore eyes, lungs collapsed but I'm not blind, sight for sore eyes. (repeat)
And even after this all stops I'll have an image in my head
and image of you taking my picture and tearing it to tiny shreds
so do I owe an apology, should I really care, when things are nice its not the same as what's really there.
You're a site for sore eyes, lungs collapsed but I'm not blind, sight for sore eyes. (repeat)
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Re: Skin Deep
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by DoomedCuthulu on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 07:35:18 PM AEST
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| I know the feeling. Tis a great poem. |
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Re: Skin Deep
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:16:30 PM AEST
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yes, i know the feeling. good poem. keep up the good work.
~sprinter27 |
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