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Inroads
Contributed by
ooniegirl
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Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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One day
I looked up
from the fortress
which was my world
and saw you
peering
cautiously, curiously,
over my far-reaching walls.
I sent you away
and yet you returned,
determined,
and attempted to clamour
up and over.
Tenatively, this time,
I let you in
and you stayed
to help me tear down those walls
perhaps poorly constructed
in the first place.
Copyright ©
ooniegirl
... [
2002-12-27 06:00:00]
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Re: Inroads
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by colette on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 03:08:29 PM AEST
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every time i think you have peaked poetically
i am flattened by your words. this is so beautiful, eeking out bits of light as the poem is written and the walls come down. love this. |
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Re: Inroads
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by OreO on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 05:03:52 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful the way your walls are torn down in the end after allowing this person into your life after sending them away like you did, this is beautifully written and i enjoyed reading it thank you for sharing it...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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