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Calmness
Contributed by
spazz911
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Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:15:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Calmness.
Swaying grass,
A thousand words
Left unsaid
Breathing softly
No footsteps on the ground
Feet in the water
Watching the river flow
The smell of quiet
Doubles as the night moves on
Starry skies all alone
Beating heart carries a rhythm of its own
Here come the clouds
And the pouring rain
Watching the puddles grow
Dripping of pain
Releasing the feelings
In the calm dew
No one to hear me
No one who knew
Softly singing to the beating
A tune of my own
It sounds insane
But its true
Clouds pass by
Starry nights again
Lying looking up
Making a wish on every star
The silent night
Brings calm.
Copyright ©
spazz911
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2005-05-01 20:15:19]
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Re: Calmness
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:20:47 PM AEST
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very awesome write, kc. i like a lot. keep up the good work.
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Re: Calmness
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by emystar on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 10:35:58 PM AEST
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Very rare indeed.
so happy u preserved this beautifull moment in time,
A masterpeice of inner beauty,
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Calmness
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by Aeturos on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 06:03:42 PM AEST
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Lovely. It reminds me of the smell of grass or prehaps snow.
It's calming in itself- in its effect on people!
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