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Can't Hold On
Contributed by
sprinter27
on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:24:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I just cant hold on no more
Im losing my grip
I am beginning to slip
No one is there to help me
So, I just cant hold on any longer
Im having a hard time fighting all this crap
So, I just cant hold on no more
It just doesnt work
I cant hold on any longer
It just doesnt work
I say, it just doesnt work
The ledge is moving away
There is nothing to grab onto
Nothing to hold onto
I just cant hold on no more
Its getting harder to live in this life
Its getting harder to control
Its getting harder to find something to hold onto
Its getting harder to hold on
Its getting easier to let go
Easier to not hold on anymore
I just cant hold on no more
Im losing my grip
I am beginning to slip
It just doesnt work
I cant hold on any longer
It just doesnt work
I say, it just doesnt work
I just cant hold on no more
Im losing my grip
I am beginning to slip
I just cant hold on no more
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Re: Can't Hold On
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by spazz911 on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:39:13 PM AEST
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| don't let go or if u do just no that i wil be there to catch you and to help you get up... I am here to talk to too... u talk to me and I'll talk to you,...deal? |
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Re: Can't Hold On
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by death_not_be_feared on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 01:37:09 AM AEST
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| good write...hang in there |
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Re: Can't Hold On
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by anonymous1212 on
Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 09:33:40 AM AEST
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| i love your poem. I think you describe where you at right now veryyy well....hang in there! |
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