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My love is like a
Contributed by
kitty_express2001
on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:31:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My love is like a dove.
that cuts deep as a knife.
ready to cut.
As I sit here I think of you and your love remembered.
I surrender every last word you have resigned.
Redisign my love and bring back the rememberence of the lost love.
Reconsider the love and the love like a dove that cuts deep as a knife
ready to cut.
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2005-05-01 20:31:12]
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Re: My love is like a
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 02:13:56 AM AEST
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this really isn't vary good. It's vage and shows no real emotion, and constistly rhyms love and dove and seems to have the word cut thrown into the mix for some odd reason.
Or maybe i am just an idoit adn i don't get it, it is a love poem after all, not my strong point. |
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