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Will You?
Contributed by
cOld
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Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 11:36:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Will you hold me 'til tomorrow
until my pain has passed away,
Will you wipe away my tears
although I'll only sin again,
Will you kiss away the lies
that I whisper in the night,
And hold me close to you
because right now it feels so right
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Re: Will You?
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by In_a_while on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 03:07:05 PM AEST
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| So true that it is short and sweet. Very strong emotions wrapped up in a strong rhyming scheme. keep it up. |
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Re: Will You?
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 04:46:05 PM AEST
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| You said it best---short, but sweet. |
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