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The Ultimate Sacrifice
Contributed by
Zeldianus
on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 12:02:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Quickly, my love, for there is not much time.
You have been wounded beyond repair,
But oh! do not despair.
I have one last trick up my sleeve
That will grant you the Final Reprieve.
Make now this climb
With me, out into the rain-storm
And up the soggy hill.
The thunder lets out its shrill
Cry and the lightning answers its call
Causing you to stumble and fall.
Now, here, near the summit
As the water increases its pour
And the Angel of Death creeps ever closer,
I clasp your hand into mine
And pull you into a tight embrace.
With my trembling voice, I whisper a prayer to Grace
Begging for your forgiveness.
I only ask that you turn away
As your sins seep into me
While I take your place on this cold, dark day.
Copyright ©
Zeldianus
... [
2005-05-02 12:02:39]
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Re: The Ultimate Sacrifice
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 12:54:31 PM AEST
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hauntingly beautiful.... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Ultimate Sacrifice
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 05:17:20 PM AEST
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This is awesome Seth, very descriptive and the image is amazing...Great job and I love the ending
~Clark |
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