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Frozen
Contributed by
Dark_Angel_BabAy
on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm frozen under the ice,
My body is numb and frail,
I've gone to far,
And my body can show,
Between the cuts, the paleness, and the thinness,
I see myself fading like the melting snow,
I can feel my bones,
I am reducing to nothing,
Who I was,
Is gone,
I put my heart and soul into something that I wanted so deeply,
It went to a point, a point it shouldn't be at,
And now there is no going back,
I am gone and I can't do anything,
I am lost into that never ending black hole,
Screaming, but unheard,
Crying but standing alone,
Gone but not Here,
Somewhere other than there,
Fading into unexistence,
Into being nothing at all,
Mentally, Physically and Emotionally,
Gone!
Copyright ©
Dark_Angel_BabAy
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2002-12-27 09:30:00]
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Re: Frozen
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by OreO on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 03:05:07 PM AEST
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This is so sad..I have put all of my heart and soul into somthing i wanted so deeply before as well it was one of the most painful times in my life that i went through....this brought back memories for me ....thanks for sharing this one...
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Re: Frozen
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 09:40:27 PM AEST
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Wow.... I dont even know what to say. This was so well written and emotional. The line, I see myself fading like the melting snow really hit me hard andI to feel like i am screaming, but unheard. Wow this has opened up wounds that have not fully healed...
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Re: Frozen
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by lilch4ever on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 12:36:20 AM AEST
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| WOW that was sooo deep. This poem is truly emotional but very good and very nicely written. |
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