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The Mannequin
Contributed by
Willofree
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Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 03:05:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Standing in the window looking out
Poised like a statue
Watching life pass me by
All seem busy rushing, in a hurry
Each one, I wonder
Where are they going?
Expressions appear strained and stressed
Another man alone....
And a woman strolling by
What are the chances they might meet?
Ah, a family of passers by
Are they all looking for someone or something
I wonder if they are happy
Do they really feel free?
People's expressions look so blank,
When they look at me
Somehow, I feel they want to escape
Perhaps they feel locked within a lifeless form, like me
Going everywhere
Belonging no where
What a lonely life that would be
A scream!
Oh, please God, somebody set me free.....
Copyright ©
Willofree
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2005-05-02 15:05:26]
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Re: The Mannequin
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 03:11:40 PM AEST
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| I just wanted to say how well I can relate to this. It's just about perfect. Expressive. |
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Re: The Mannequin
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 03:19:16 PM AEST
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great images, sadly observant, a moment in life..... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Mannequin
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by Whisper on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 03:30:02 PM AEST
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Nice write. I can relate- Like a moth flapping its wings against that icy window glass...
I enjoyed that write I reminded me we all wish to be free.
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Re: The Mannequin
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 12:40:57 AM AEST
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I can relate to this (and not 'cause i got a mannequins shiny head!) how often we must all feel removed from the world...
A very thought provoking write, well expressed.
Johnny. |
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