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Miracles
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 03:35:02 PM in AEST
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Miracles
She was in her room again soaking wet and cold from the rain
They had another fight and she was almost raped but wasnt almost beaten
She has bruises all over but she is even more broken in side
Shes a cutter like me who had not cut for a while
She had not cut coz she found him and now the only good thing in her life fell apart
So she heads to her closet opens it and gets on her knees
She pulls the close apart and takes out a shoe box with her blade
She takes it into her hand and feels like ending it right there and then and
Her little sister walks into the room and sees her
Her sister gets down on her knees and starts to cry and
They hug
No matter how alone you feel inside
Out side you never are
He is out again having a great time trying not to drink too much
Trying not to drink at all actually but he has a few zips of Smirnoff and
Like me he finds it is really very good and has a bottle or two
Not really enough to get you drunk
But some one gave him an open bottle they had slipped something into it
He does not feel the effects but feels something and it is late
The party is almost over and he has to go
He walks to his car alone and feels really sick
But he said that he feels good enough to drive home
So he gets in his car and starts to drive off and he feels even worse
So he puts the car on park and walks out and throws up
He gets back in his car and drives back to the party to get a ride home
On the way home on his block the house next door was having a birthday party
And the kids were out playing in the streets
Always listen to what your body tells you sometimes its something more
Things happen to every one sometime in their life when they need it or dont know they need it. Little things can mean a lot and hurt a lot when they go wrong. When I met you I was a point in my life where I needed something. I felt alone and tired and could not go on. You felt the same and then we met. And now I dont think we could be happier. I love you so much. I love and admire everything about you all the little things and all the great things about you. And I want you to love me. You are what I needed in my life and will always love. I will always want you like this and more.
I know with you in my life I am never alone. I know that I am loved. And you make me see that its not just by you. I am loved by many and by me too. And its all coz of you. How happy you make me. How you make me feel. Every one sees it in me. Every one sees you.
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Re: Miracles
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 04:39:32 PM AEST
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| Great write!! Very heartfelt, some parts are sad, but with a beautiful end. |
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Re: Miracles
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by footballfan385 on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 06:22:15 PM AEST
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| this poem lacks a little bit of fundamentals but you go your message across and it is a great message and plus there are many good parts to the poem, just a few lines that are a little edgy, but all in all, good poem, keep writing |
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Re: Miracles
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 07:44:59 PM AEST
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| amazing write, you will never be alone. |
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Re: Miracles
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 10:33:08 AM AEST
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There is always someone there to lend a helping hand.
Excellent write
Love Angelxxxx |
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