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Tears
Contributed by
B-Randy
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Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 07:18:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Liquid emotion wells up in his eyes,
Feeling broken, dejected, devoid of all worth, he cries.
Tears, the blood of ones soul,
the life force of human emotion,
run down his face in an eternal river of sorrow.
Cursed with a wound that will
never heal, his broken heart is slowly drained.
What little feeling it once held
now lieswet against his cheek.
Copyright ©
B-Randy
... [
2005-05-02 19:18:01]
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Re: Tears
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by Anne-ish on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 08:14:54 PM AEST
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| Beautiful choice of words. Very good poem. |
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Re: Tears
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 09:37:20 PM AEST
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Tears, the blood of ones soul,
the life force of human emotion,
I love these lines, great job. |
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Re: Tears
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 11:20:24 PM AEST
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| I liked this poem. it was kind of sad. but it was very good.. well rhymed. |
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Re: Tears
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by mylady on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 10:19:19 AM AEST
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| Very nice and sad .like the peom... |
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