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Contributed by
moon_light
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Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 09:53:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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its odd how one moment your on top of the world.
then the next, your crashing down.
laughter turns to tears.
dreams turn to fears.
the next morning
you wake up
hopeing its all a night mare
fire and flames
claim all in sight
a spirit free in eternal light
every thing you've known
is gone with a spat and a storm
a life once bright is now lost.
one small thing
one great cost
Copyright ©
moon_light
... [
2005-05-02 21:53:28]
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Re: gone
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 10:34:51 PM AEST
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true... honest... wonderful expression of feelings, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: gone
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by hellsfallenangel on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 08:23:46 PM AEST
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i love it its very good well i g2g ttyl bye bye
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Re: gone
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by thumper on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 01:44:36 AM AEST
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Very insightful. We both know how fire and flames can wipe out everything. Your last two lines are very short but speak volumes. Write on, Jenny!
Luv ya,
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