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Realm Of Your Heart...
Contributed by
mina-1
on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 12:36:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The butterflies frolick
Amidst the blue lustred sky
Flying ever so beautifully
Colours reflected as they fly by
Rainbow fish clutter
Swimming together they go
Going with the currents
Like rainbow dreams they flow
My mind drifts off
Across to your destined shores
Gliding with the wind's breeze
Your heart I want to explore
I emerge into your dreams
Where I run into your loving arms
We lay under the moonlit sky
As you serenade me with your charm
I listen to your soft breathing
As my head rests on your chest
Your arms embracing me
For your love I've conquest
As we lay in each other's arms
I wished it would last forever
For only in my dream
Can we be together
It's the realm of your heart
That my burning love seeks
I'll build around it a fortress
Well guarded your heart I'd keep
One wish I pray for everynight
Down on bended knees
Is that this love lasts forever
Between you and me...
Copyright ©
mina-1
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2005-05-03 00:36:26]
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Re: Realm Of Your Heart...
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 12:52:53 AM AEST
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Good luck in your quest.
great write.
huggs,
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Re: Realm Of Your Heart...
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by dvsnme816 on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 04:17:00 AM AEST
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The quest you seek is about as far away as the next day...an arms length away. Such a beautiful write, the person behind the pen is most likely a person of many passions and wanting love's longevity. I envy how you think Sue, one day you will teach me to write like you do ;) .
XOXOXO
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Re: Realm Of Your Heart...
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 05:32:05 AM AEST
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Sue, this was just utterly brilliant,.
what well writen piece of petry you have created here.
Well done.
Jane~ |
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Re: Realm Of Your Heart...
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 06:45:04 AM AEST
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Wow..your beautiful promise in this poem creates ripples in the minds of readers..:-)
I like such romantic poems..venkat |
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Re: Realm Of Your Heart...
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 06:56:56 AM AEST
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| Great poem. (I know I leave that comment a lot but i do mean it. This is very inspirational. |
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Re: Realm Of Your Heart...
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:33:04 AM AEST
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wow this is beautiful
i luv the word pictures u painted
this is amazing and wat a lovely dream
great poetry |
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Re: Realm Of Your Heart...
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by sride686 on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:26:56 PM AEST
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| So much talent in your work Sue and always a joy to read. Its nice to get back online and read some beautiful art once again. This was a very powerful right and it had outstanding lines one after another. It also had a very strong ending which as you know is one of the things I look for in a good piece. You write so beautiful Sue and I thank you for sharing yet another beautiful work of art with all of us who read. Take care my friend….Steve |
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Re: Realm Of Your Heart...
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 04:28:02 PM AEST
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Sue..this is absolutely breathtaking... it left me with such a peaceful feeling. I'm overwhelmed......
Sorry I haven't been commenting more...(been really busy)
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Realm Of Your Heart...
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by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 10:42:39 PM AEST
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LIKE A BED TIME STORY,
BEFORE I FALL ASLEEP,
IT TAKES AWAY ALL MY WORRIES,
SO SWEET DREAMS I CAN TRUELY KEEP,
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BRING ME A VISION,
AS YOU COME SO NEAR,
TWO HEARTS ON A COLLISION,
AS DESTINY CONTINUES TO STEER !
IT WAS A BEAUTIFUL & HEART WARMING POEM MINA! IT CATCHES YOU OFF GUARD,THEN SECURES YOU DEEP IN YOUR HEART!! A 5 FOR SURE!!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!
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Re: Realm Of Your Heart...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 12:38:47 AM AEST
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(((((Sue)))))))))
This is both breathetaking and beautiful, well done.
Leia |
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Re: Realm Of Your Heart...
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 10:14:21 AM AEST
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Beautiful and serene.
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Realm Of Your Heart...
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 11:23:47 PM AEST
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Very beautiful.
Scott |
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