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The Shards That Become Our Reflections
Contributed by
Onslaught
on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 12:36:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Thoughts
Like a two sided coin
The substance of luck
A fifty-fifty chance
But who is it that flips
Thoughts
Chemical words
A language of erosion
Imprinted in invisible matter
Formed out of static probabilities
A liquid that does not flow
But who is it that merely sips
Everything good
Created blindly
Without intent
Everything bad
Created blindly
Without relent
Thoughts
Guide us
But they are not created by us
Why should this be
We are all servants
Of the happenstance
We are all the multiple personalities
Of Coincidence
There is only one mind that exists
And we are all fragments of it
Created from cataclysmic explosions
Like tragic events in a childhood
Splitting apart the cosmic mind
Into Shards that become our reflections
Everything good
Created blindly
Without intent
Everything bad
Created blindly
Without relent
In the Shards
That become our reflections
We are all
The Multiple Personalities
Of Coincidence
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Onslaught
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Re: The Shards That Become Our Reflections
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:44:05 AM AEST
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I very much enjoyed this.
Unconventional yet nonetheless thought provoking. Some well thought-out ideas and concepts...theories, even.
You have raised some excellent analogies and interesting ideas.
A stimulating read. |
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Re: The Shards That Become Our Reflections
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 05:20:37 AM AEST
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Jeesh Mike that was just incredible. I like the way you wrote this. very powerful indeed.
Jane~ |
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Re: The Shards That Become Our Reflections
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 08:54:39 PM AEST
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| =], what brought me to read this piece was the fact that you wrote it and the title, and i wasnt dissapointed either. you presented your main focal point strongly as you always seem to do in the works i read by you. you always have a superb ending, and one part that makes the poem stand out among others, and in this poem it is in the 4th stanza. |
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