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On Da Street
Contributed by
EmSal
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Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 01:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Lost in a world of no hope
Searching for numbing dope.
Seeing girls in the street
They're no hopers going cheap.
Why am I out here all alone?
Looking for my brain to stone.
My life is going the wrong way I know
In the streets feeling low.
Looking for someone who may care
What I may be doing out there.
Found young people just like me
Not afraid to die anymore I see.
Copyright ©
EmSal
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2002-12-27 13:30:00]
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Re: On Da Street
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by Jayraja on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 01:49:53 PM AEST
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You are right friend, there are plenty of folks like this out there.
Love from India - Joel - |
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Re: On Da Street
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by OreO on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 05:14:43 PM AEST
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You are right my friend there are so many people in the world like this anymore, who are not afraid to die...all it ever does is get worse and it shall continue to get worse...people don't seem to understand that for some reason though...I know people who want to die and who have died....and all i can say for those still alive that are not afraid to die anymore is that i hope you don't die....but it's hard to say anything over a computer....this is a good write my friend...welcome to YPDC and i surely hope to see you writing more poetry...don't bind your talent...you write beautifully ...and i'd like to read more of your writings....
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Re: On Da Street
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 11:15:57 PM AEST
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| Hey thanks for the comment really appreciated :). |
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Re: On Da Street
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 11:17:27 PM AEST
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| Hey thanks so much Oreo, I'm still getting used to being a member here intead of just posting annoymous comments and reading others poems. Thanks, Ciao. |
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Re: On Da Street
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 03:34:44 AM AEST
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| Mmmmm.... you have spoke the truth. You are such a beautiful writer. Such a soul should never be hurt nor alone! I am here for you always and forever! |
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