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Why
Contributed by
edward_jarvis2000
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Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 12:56:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Why'd you leave me?
I ask all the time,
so confused,
no good bye,
maybe a sigh,
I'm so scared,
I'ts all in me head,
can't get it out,
you left me,
now I now,
It was your time to die.
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Re: Why
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:28:13 PM AEST
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Great write. Writing helps me to get my feelings out, then I can look at it and have a realistic view of the world and of myself.
You are going through a tough time right now and it is okay to have bad feelings there will come a time when you can move on. The best thing you can do is write if it helps. What I am saying is do what helps you to get through the pain. |
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