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Night
Contributed by
whoelse
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Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 05:22:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Night.
I can feel it on my breath
Under my fingernails
Begging me to char and fade into its shadows.
I live for the moon stealing light from the sun
reflecting its dreams on us all.
Dreams like a haze pf purple smoke
Clouding my reality into stardust and lace
My windows like a prism casting
technicoor headlights from the cars.
Night.
Leaves pillows stained with teardrops,
Cheeks still wet with dreams.
Copyright ©
whoelse
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2005-05-03 17:22:28]
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Re: Night
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by Aquaelius on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 05:46:23 PM AEST
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Lots of good imagery. Thanks for sharing.
Aq. |
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Re: Night
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 05:53:53 PM AEST
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| Interesting interpretation, I like it. Especially the ending. |
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Re: Night
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by candysears on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 02:41:40 PM AEST
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| I really like this write...The ending was especially nice....God Bless! |
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