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On My Own
Contributed by
iluvpencils
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Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 10:40:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I tried it on my own
Thought I wasn't alone
Took me a bit too long to realize
There's no one here to hold
On my own
I'm so alone
I stood so brave
Not willing to wait
But I've fallen a few too many times
I've realized
I can't do this on my own
Calling out, I'm screaming
So desperately, grasping now
This is the first time...
Out loud
Can't do this by myself
Guess I need someone else
To take my life
In their hands
'Cause I can't...
I can't
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iluvpencils
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2005-05-03 22:40:43]
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Re: On My Own
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 10:45:10 PM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
U r stronger than u think.
Take care and p.m. me any time u need to talk.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: On My Own
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 11:18:22 PM AEST
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| This was a good poem and just remember you are never totaly alone, someone is always thinking about you. |
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