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I TAKE
Contributed by
Onslaught
on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:11:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I take the World
Upon Myself
I take the World
To a higher place
I take the World
Upon Myself
I take the World
And Shove it back
In your face
I take the World
Upon Myself
I take the World
To a higher place
I take the World
Upon Myself
I take the World
Away from
All disgrace
Copyright ©
Onslaught
... [
2005-05-04 01:11:44]
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Re: I TAKE
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:47:19 AM AEST
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A powerful write, most intruging and perplexing...the rationale beneath this piece, seems abysmal...perhaps i have misinterpreted? Yet it feels as though you are emphasising a concept in regards to spirituality, than anything of tangible significance?
Loved it.
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Re: I TAKE
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 03:26:20 AM AEST
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Mike, this was a really well writen poem. Me likes it a lot.
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