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Done with love
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:54:36 AM in AEST
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I am done with love.
Everyday I see her my love begins. Everyday her laughter catches my breath; compells me to speak; promises me peace, and all my love remains.
Everyday I see such sadnesses in her, that i cannot even contain my own tears; her eyes dry and unafraid; her eyes unmoved, unaware of the freedom she places in my hand; the freedom that i cannot speak, that i cannot think or will away in my sleep;
the freedom that, I, afraid, cannot consider in my life; that i cannot consider because of my own life, because of my own willingness to love.
I am done with love.
I laugh and speak and I cannot close her from my thought. I cannot close her from my dreams, she is in everything. And I am done with her. I will not be close, I will not fall into that pain again because I cannot know that memory again, I cannot know that loss. So I am done with love.
So I am done.
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Re: Done with love
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 02:33:03 AM AEST
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Very, very sad but well written.
Hope u feel better realy soon.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Done with love
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 04:24:32 AM AEST
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amazing poetry abraham! ur words r so beautiful and i can relate so much
i think im done with love too..causes too much pain |
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Re: Done with love
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by heartless_soul on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 01:27:10 AM AEST
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| dont say this, it is a beautful thing that you had, love of any kind that you truly feel is a gift dont say that you want to give that up, it will make you happe when you look back on it (trust me) if she is still there then its understandibal to be up set so, tell her how youu feel you might be surprised by her reaction, (I dont know ,I dont k now why or how you to seperated...) I do wish you the best. Be well. |
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