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Viscious Wishes
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 10:24:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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No birds here land
in my twisted hand
they can see the rot
that's of no thought
No bugs here play
near my grey dismay
i would only feed
bugs only need
No stairs to sky
no eyes to cry
wanna be blue?
read on, see you
No stars shine
a dim fine line
pass through walls
seek dying calls...
but wait....
Yes to the sun
smile to the fun
run on the rainbow
let all the pain go
Tomorrow after all, is another day.
Copyright ©
In_a_While
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2005-05-04 10:24:52]
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Re: Viscious Wishes
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by BrunetteShay89 on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 10:35:19 AM AEST
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very creative... keep up the good work. if you ever have writers block or need help in any way with writing a poem... let me know!
"I'm far from lonely and it's all that I've got..."
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Re: Viscious Wishes
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 11:18:14 AM AEST
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simple yet sweet, i loved it
kate
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