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I can''t resist it
Contributed by
tres_estrellas
on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 10:24:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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It digs deeper
I feel it cut me
I'm so vunrable
to you
You make me swell
you make me pain
You're ripping me
and scarring me
My body feels your pain
your sorrow and surpressed hurt
I can see your reasons
and they just wont leave me alone
I feel heavy
My body limp
I see nothing
but white
pale and young
the everlasting beauty
the colourless response
of the unfortunate
Like flowers
they bloom and grow
and beautiful
then wilter and die
And like thorns too
prick and stab
deep wounds
splintered deep
engaging in darkness forever
not even memories remain
absolutely helpless
it's tearing me apart
this sensation
is freeing me
It's releasing me
I can't resist it
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Re: I can''t resist it
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by BrunetteShay89 on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 10:38:38 AM AEST
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| awesome poem... it makes me able to feel the emotions that are being described through the words. keep up the good work. |
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Re: I can''t resist it
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 07:36:16 PM AEST
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Great flow
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Re: I can''t resist it
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:33:39 AM AEST
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Tres
Another awsome write its frightning.
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