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I DON'T KNOW WHAT LIFE IS ABOUT?
Contributed by
theeman
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Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 11:10:50 AM in AEST
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I don't know what life is about.
I dont know if there is anyway out
Life is full of beautiful things
Many Summers,Winters and Springs
As long as the sun shines everyday
Enjoy what you do,come what may
I don't know what life is about.
I don't think there is any need to shout
Sometimes we are happy,sometimes, sad.
Some times are good, some times, bad.
Sometimes we cry,sometimes we smile.
Sometimes we run,sometimes wait a while.
I don't know what life is about.
It feels like I am in a bout
Sometimes life is fair to us
Sometimes life is merciless
I don't know what life is about.
Can someone clear my doubt?
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theeman
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2005-05-04 11:10:50]
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Re: I DON'T KNOW WHAT LIFE IS ABOUT?
(User Rating: 1 )
by dthwlkr on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 11:44:17 PM AEST
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yeah i can clear ur doubt, life is about maintaing our site-the psychos
i bet u guessed already this is ur very own dthwlkr,man our site aint working, the main forum page that is, check it out and put us back on
anyway grimm is here, man is he screwed he's gotta read a thousand page before 24th and his project only starts on the 25th he is pretty much dead and that means i wont be able to come to meet u guyz(waaaaaaah)
anyway have fun enjoy ur holidays and best of luck to Matt for his GMAT exams
get us back on man am kinda missing being on psychos
chao take care buddy |
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Re: I DON'T KNOW WHAT LIFE IS ABOUT?
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by tortured_soul on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 05:14:38 PM AEST
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| I like it but i think it rhymes a little too much, maybe try every other line i'd give it an 8 on a scale of 1-10. |
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