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finally
Contributed by
stinger
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Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 12:54:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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in my youth i was quite shy, of that i cannnot lie,
it took years upon years and then by and by
the cocoon i was in seemed to disinagrate........
not soon enough for me, then again not to late.
oh the things that i learned and the things that i did,
all the things that i dreamed of when i was a kid;
all came true and for real in a burst of sheer power,
no more need to be silent, nor mumble, nor cower.
an evolution of sorts in me finding me,
the time was just right to just finally be.
Copyright ©
stinger
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2005-05-04 12:54:14]
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Re: finally
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by Sonic_phoenix on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:13:02 PM AEST
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love it
jen |
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Re: finally
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:28:46 PM AEST
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| Good poem! I really liked the 2nd verse... |
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Re: finally
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 02:49:12 PM AEST
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| absolutely powerful rhyming skill!! and a strong message as well! Good job and i look forward to more. |
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