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Duality of mankind
Contributed by
ElTorroII
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Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Smiling faces passing by
Intentions good, I wonder why
Emotions seldom shown to others
We tend to hurt our friends and lovers
I wonder how this world would be
If our emotions were set free
To know the truth through others faces
might save some hearts, might bring some changes
The lies we tell without a word
They build within, yet never heard
(C)2002 C. Bellinger
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ElTorroII
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2002-12-27 19:00:00]
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Re: Duality of mankind
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by OreO on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 08:34:50 PM AEST
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People will normally not show their emotions to others...and it is true we tend to hurt the people whom are closest to us in life, why? i have no clue, that's weird to me ...but if our emotions were set free there's no tellin where we would all be in life, i dont know ...this poem gives a person alot to think about...it raises many questions...and it's uniquely written, thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it tremendously...welcome to YPDC i look forward to reading more of your writings...
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Re: Duality of mankind
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by okokjazz on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 02:07:07 PM AEST
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| i have to say i really like this one...i usually try and find something constructive to say (just cos i think it's more useful!) but there i can't think of a decent one for this! thanks! |
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Re: Duality of mankind
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 09:17:43 PM AEST
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Quite simply WHY??
Very well writen Charles, excellent point!
With love
Dean:-) |
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