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What's Really Going On
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
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Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 05:14:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Beneath the willow I write
Out of mind, out of sight
I'm the girl you think you know
But I'll never let my true feelings show
For as long as you need me
There I will always be
Writing of my thoughts so deep
Hiding from you when I have to weep
This smile I paint on my face
Helps me hide my feelings of disgrace
When I'm helping make your problems gone
Yet I'll never tell you what's wrong
And for that I am ashamed
That I cannot share when i am pained
So every night I'll cry
Because I can't tell you I might die
And now I know what he went through
When he kept this same secret from me and you
Oh I wish I could make it all right
So I wouldn't have to say good-bye tonight
Take something to remember when I'm gone
Because this is what's really going on
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
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Re: What's Really Going On
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by UnlovedChild on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 05:53:32 PM AEST
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| Great poem Kiela. *hugs* and this made me cry. |
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Re: What's Really Going On
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 06:11:04 PM AEST
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| Sadness hides in the best of us and somehow we find a way to turn it into some one elses joy. Great write. |
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Re: What's Really Going On
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 07:20:36 PM AEST
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U have the courage, problem is the compassion gets in the way . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: What's Really Going On
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by ruthie1983 on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 09:07:35 PM AEST
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| Interesting way to express whats bothering you or whats going on in your life. I like this poem. |
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Re: What's Really Going On
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 11:27:36 PM AEST
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WHAT THE ARE YOU SAYING? YOU'RE TOO GOOD TO THROW YOUR LIFE AWAY!! LOOK AT THE WORDS THAT COME FROM YOUR HEART,THEY'RE A REFLECTION OFF OF YOUR GOLDEN LITTLE HEART!!! YOUR EYES ARE OF DIMONDS BECAUSE THEY'RE FOREVER,& SO IS EVERYTHING ELSE ABOUT YOU ALTOGETHER!!!! IF YOU LEFT US NOW,THEN LOVE JUST WOULDN'T KNOW HOW,TO GO ON & BE SO STRONG,YOU'RE THE ONLY ONE WHO CAN KEEP IT GOING ON & MAKE IT LAST A LIFETIME LONG!!!!! I DON'T THINK YOU WANNA TAKE ALL THAT AWAY,BECAUSE YOU'RE A SPECIAL PERSON EACH & EVERY DAY!!!!!! nuff said!!!!!!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!!!!! |
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Re: What's Really Going On
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:02:30 AM AEST
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awww hugs kiela.
girly you ever need to talk.PM me ok.
dont do anything foolish.
awsome write |
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Re: What's Really Going On
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 10:42:51 AM AEST
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Dont keep these emotions locked inside. True friends will be there to listen and have a shoulder to cry on. Be you accept me for who I am..
A fabulous poem
Love Angelxxxxxx |
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Re: What's Really Going On
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by freckle on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 09:53:14 PM AEST
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This is a really great poem. Very sad, but really good. You know that you have your buddies on here if you ever need us! Chin up sweetie! Life gets better.
Carol |
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Re: What's Really Going On
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by O7NeVeS on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 01:42:12 PM AEST
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| great write i can definitely relate to that! Tanya |
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