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Love Incapable
Contributed by
philly
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Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 07:36:36 PM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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She walks in a beauty all her own A beauty so unique- and so lovely it could only be hers A beauty so powerful it shakes the very foundations of my composure And I- I am afraid to love I fear I am not ready for her But my heart presses me on and I cannot escape it I pray for the courage to reveal my heart I pray she'll understand me And I pray she will understand my love Love, what an indescribable thing it is For so long I knew not what it was But now I've found it in her And my thoughts once occupied with despair Are now full of hope With the slightest gesture She can lift my spirits With the most meager acts of kindess She can give me back my joy Oh how she knows not the depths of my affection My happiest dreams My most valued hopes She could make them all real and all true I see her in every gentle sunset I see her in every peaceful ocean I see her in everything pure and beautiful In my heart I wonder of what shall be My heart grows softer and softer everytime I think of her What she is to me would take an eternity to describe My love and affection knows no limits- no boundaries Like the soft and endless sky And she- she is just on the horizon Her image rises slowly like the sun Until it fills the expanse of the sky in my heart Filling it with hope and contentment Once I thought I was incapable of love But she has shown me how quite capable of love I am
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Re: Love Incapable
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 09:20:32 PM AEST (User
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Philly, this is awesome!!! It's so beautiful...you should show it to her... How could anyone resist a man writing this to her... sigh....:>)
Great job...
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Re: Love Incapable
(User Rating: 1 ) by thorns on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 01:33:44 AM AEST (User
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"Her image rises slowly like the sun
Until it fills the expanse of the sky in my heart"
these lines are beautiful.
this poems is much like someting Pip could have said of Estella in Dickens' Great Expectations. |
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Re: Love Incapable
(User Rating: 1 ) by mckayla on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 05:50:38 PM AEST (User
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This is a great poem!! I cant wait to read some more of your work!
mckayla |
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