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Bad Habit
Contributed by
tiger_grl
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Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 08:23:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I wished you away
I never thought Id hear the end
Of my own complaints
I guess that everythings less broken
when its gone
when youre trying to piece together shards
Reconstruct reason
Reflect
There is always a way to fix it
When its no longer your responsibility
Maybe tomorrow Ill wake up
Slapped with the shock of solitude
And itll sink in
And I can restart
And we can have memories instead of scars
But right now Im still waiting
To see your car pull into the yard
Hear your hand on the door
And listen to you list the days complaints
right now youre still a habit
but maybe tomorrow -
Ill take up smoking.
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2005-05-04 20:23:30]
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Re: Bad Habit
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 08:32:07 PM AEST
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Tiger-grl
Sound as if this poem should be under angry poetry ? :(
Good job on the poem it is well written.
Take up smoking.
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