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incomplete
Contributed by
tiger_grl
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Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 08:43:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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without you i feel incomplete
my heart is racing trying to complete
the hole in my heart
growing more each day
in this process i fade away
dreams are gone
all thats left is lifes negative aspects
tearing me down
im slowly creating a wall
a barrier made of steel
i wont let you in
its just something i feel
you're so far away
it hurts to compete
as long as you're away
i am incomplete.
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2005-05-04 20:43:09]
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Re: incomplete
(User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 07:37:06 AM AEST
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I know what it's like to have that burning
emptiness inside your heart that can only be
put out by a loved one...
Great poem!
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