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What I Must Ask You Is In This
Contributed by
CONCRETE_ROSE
on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 09:54:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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What I want to ask of you is this,
If I can find the nerve to make the leap:
Life scatters dreams across the hills of sleep,
Lest we be too easy in our bliss.
Yet I am aware what I might miss.
Only what we treasure can we keep,
Ultimately sowing what we reap,
Modeling a world upon a kiss.
And so I must reveal to you my heart,
Recalling all my courage from its rest,
Ready for whatever word might be.
You are all the object of my quest,
My cynosure, my life, my other part.
Each line of this begins my urgent plea.
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CONCRETE_ROSE
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2005-05-05 09:54:16]
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Re: What I Must Ask You Is In This
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 12:51:33 PM AEST
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wow , that was really sweet. great way to express yourself and especially the way you hid your question. ive read alot of your writing and i really like it. keep it up!
-Courtney
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