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Burnt with fear
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 11:49:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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as i stand on melting sand
i see the hell below me
all the faces face disgraces
no water's left to grow me
on a plain of winter's rain
i shiver until i break
i never knew depression grew
drugs disguise mistake
i swing on trees with noose disease
weeping bugs at dawn
sleeping sounds, grey death clouds
tomorrow's not all gone
hills of pills i play with stills
pictures of all who perished
overdose deep comatose
would my words be cherished?
all my words are blackened birds
so take away my flock
keep me here so burnt with fear
my time is of no clock...
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In_a_While
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2005-05-05 11:49:29]
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Re: Burnt with fear
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by shelby on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 01:54:09 PM AEST
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this flowed perfectly had so much emotion and thought provoking feeling it it
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Re: Burnt with fear
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by Sleepy-Head on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 03:56:27 PM AEST
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| You have a very unique style...and I like it. Very nice selection of words; good job on the flow of it all. |
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Re: Burnt with fear
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by Alina on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 06:22:44 PM AEST
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WOW! You never cease to amaze me. I have
enjoyed ALL of your poems. You are truelly
talented. Keep it up!
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Re: Burnt with fear
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 11:48:53 AM AEST
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awsome peom, nice way to say "i shiver until i break
i never knew depression grew
drugs disguise mistake"
me likey, me went through that.
good write
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