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Soft as the Babies Bottom
Contributed by
jyssvw
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Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 12:04:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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How soft is she
Like the babies bottom
When his mothers got em
Held in her loving arms
How far gone are we
That the scenery replaced
Looks nothing like home
Nothingness stares you in the face
How bad will get
Before the better arrives
Before the feather of the dove
Falls from the dark sky
When will it heal
The wound that grows
Infected and congested
The doctors dont even know
Who will speak
When spoken about
When badmouthed and slandered
The verdict is out
What will it mean
To hear him scream and shout
To see him burned!
To kick him the hell out!
Who will confess
The sins of mankind
The burdens of demons
The heathens of our time
Where will you be
When the day does indeed arrive
The time of day
Just before the sun rise
When will you learn
How to compromise
Not to criticize
Paralyzed with your arms by your sides
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Re: Soft as the Babies Bottom
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 12:06:34 PM AEST
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Your writes are intriguing because they seem like messages but it's never clear who they are too. I keep trying to figure them out. lol
If intrigue makes them good (like a mystery story) then I reckon they are good.
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Re: Soft as the Babies Bottom
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:48:47 PM AEST
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Nice writes...Saying so much yet so little...Good job. I especially like verse 5.
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Re: Soft as the Babies Bottom
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by shelby on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:59:28 PM AEST
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deep very deep all your writes draw me in
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