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Hate me Because I helped?
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 01:08:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You hate me. You hate me.
I'm me, so you hate me.
I was good to you, so you blame me
That the world isn't like me
You hate me because I'm not like you want
When you had accepted your pain
I brought you along
To this place where for the first time in so long
You've actually been happy. Not a face
not a mask, not a lie, not an act
Not the falsehood you had grown to depend on
But the truth, and you saw how your pain hurt
But you left and you claim that it's my fault
Now you know there is something better
And now you have thrown it away
And now you aren't happy in your gutter
and you need someone else you can blame
Someone wronged you, and that's sad
indeed, lamentable enough,
but for you to then say that I made it?
When it's either you or he who brought pain.
Maybe you're right. Maybe I am mean and evil
Maybe I was just taunting you with lies.
I have given food to the hungry, so hate me.
I have offered relief to the pained
I have comforted sickly, unhappy, and grisly
so yes, for this I'm to blame.
But the thirsty have water and hesitate to drink it
fearful of the dangers of trust
But some of them yet dare to find that it's clean
and it's pointless to mention the rest
Those who dared now go out and remembered clean water
But in truth, have forgotten what it looks like
So they guess for another place for their supply
And are wronged because they thought it was healthy
When in fact they were full, they were filled
I had already given them water
But their greed sends them further, and ill has remembered
that gluttony is level with traitors
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Re: Hate me Because I helped?
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 01:54:14 PM AEST
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I really like this...my fav part is:
I have offered relief to the pained, I have comforted sickly, unhappy, and grisly so yes, for this I'm to blame...Nice job. Scorp. |
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Re: Hate me Because I helped?
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by shelby on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 02:06:31 PM AEST
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right from the heart this is a great write cant say which part I enjoy the best because the entire write is great
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Re: Hate me Because I helped?
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by MajesticPoet on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 03:17:27 PM AEST
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| I am glad you all like it. Just another jumble of my thoughts transposed to paper.. |
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