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To a Better Place
Contributed by
calista
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Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 07:22:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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To a Better Place
May 5, 2005
To a better place, they say
Maybe they truly believe it
Or are trying to make everything okay
Either way it is the same
There, you'll be better than you have been in years
You now
Have a memory
Have thoughts once more
You now
Have smiles to share
And time to make up
You now
Can walk again
Talk again
You now
Can love again
And know why
You now
Can spread your wings
And fly
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calista
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2005-05-05 19:22:58]
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Re: To a Better Place
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by Unbreakable on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 05:23:44 AM AEST
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Interesting rhyme scheme...I like it a lot. I especially like the end of the poem. Good job, keep it up!
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