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learning to breathe
Contributed by
rustygrl33
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Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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the sun is so shiny/ and yet so tiny/ why is everything so new/ becuz i'm learning without you/ you are gone/ every tree, every pond/ it's all so new to me/ i'm learning to be/ to breathe, to live, to be me/ no longer living on fantasy/ all of me more sane you see/ like i am a real living human/ never as before, you are gone/ all of me is no longer bond/ broken now and i can see/ life without you glued to me/ i'm learning to breathe/ without your name in my mouth/ dude, you left me for the south/ life rox cuz i am learning to be/ to breathe, to live, to be me
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Re: learning to breathe
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by OreO on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 12:33:11 AM AEST
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Learning to breathe after loving someone so deeply is sometimes hard and sometimes helps us become stronger, i think each person goes through something different .....i enjoyed reading this one alot ....welcome to YPDC...i look forward to reading more of your poetry....thanks for sharing this one....
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Re: learning to breathe
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by venkat on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 02:16:54 AM AEST
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| You innocent child . Nature definitely supplies ample oxygen to you.It is nice to see you there in the lap of of nature. see you again..Venkat |
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Re: learning to breathe
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by Mystery_Girl on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 05:46:04 AM AEST
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| Wish you all the best....nice write....Tanya..:-) |
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