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Confusion of Sorts
Contributed by
dreamer_for_eternity
on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 08:13:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Icy glances reflecting
On those whom I once knew
Delivering me misery
All I once knew is untrue
Since my reality
Was shaken and disturbed
I stopped dreaming
Feeling too perturbed
Advice has been placed
Onto my once strong shoulders
Find the core of the sorrow
Easily remove life's wretched boulders
Finding a core
That does not lure
Is a difficult task
To fight and endure
Time flies much too quickly
As do my days
Rushing as a stream of water
Foggy in a haze
I just need some time
To part with what I don't desire
And one measly match
To light my life's burnt out fire
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Re: Confusion of Sorts
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 08:38:58 PM AEST
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absolutely remarkable poem! i loved the last stanza and ur word use was great and good flow
well done, i can relate so much |
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Re: Confusion of Sorts
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 11:02:34 PM AEST
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Yeah I can relate to this as I too need to
relight the fading fires of my life. This was a
great poem the title stood out for some
reason and I am glad that I read this. Thanks
for sharing it.
Bobo (Joel) |
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