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The angel comes as i dream...
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 08:31:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I close my eyes and drift away into a dream
To foresee the future so it may seem
The Angel of Foresight visits me and this is what he chanted:
Tonight with the gift of foresight you have been granted
He lifts away my soul to an untold faraway place
Where I am to envision my destiny and fate to embrace
I see myself upon the pillow with pills beside my bed
Looks like I am only sleeping but no I am dead
My hands are drenched in blood as the fierce knife I hold
Sliced cuts upon my arm familiar with a pain so old
On the floor is where my reluctant suicide note does lie
Marked with tears and my sorrowful goodbye
My eyes are closed and I am at one with peace
Finally free from any sorrow I have gained release
This is how ends my long trial
Upon waking I happily smile
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pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-05-05 20:31:32]
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Re: The angel comes as i dream...
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by ForeverAlone on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 08:49:11 PM AEST
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This is another amazing poem Rach..I love the way it flows and the rhyme...everything is so smooth in this..Very Good.
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Re: The angel comes as i dream...
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by Zeldianus on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 09:36:38 PM AEST
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| very sorrowful. i like it . very well done |
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Re: The angel comes as i dream...
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 10:24:28 PM AEST
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Great write---this is the kind of poem I really like....no-holds barred, not sugar-coated, just served raw and full of detail. Very good!
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