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Killing Force Of Five
Contributed by
InexactExactness
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Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Pride hangs the lion
It can't escape it's grip
It's a killing force
Curiosity stabs the cat
It can't suffice the pain
It's a killing force
Love engulfs the king
He can't please them all
It's his killing force
Tricks trick out the Joker
He can't escape his fate
It's his killing force
Ignorance killed the Man
He can't realize the truth
It's his downfall
It's his killing force
All 5 beings all of my friend
All of whom I once knew
All 5 beings bringing me gifts
All 5 killing me too
My pride
My curiosity
My love
My tricks
My ignorance
All make my killing force grow
I still haven't learned from how I was
I still must run away
And I still am chased by not what I see
As the fear of my nature sweeps through
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InexactExactness
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2002-12-27 23:40:00]
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Re: Killing Force Of Five
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by OreO on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 12:44:01 AM AEST
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Pride, such harm this one can do to one's soul if not careful how cleverly it's to be used.....Curiosity i wouldnt say killed anything i would say would be the very nature of what actually brings force upon one's soul to know....Love? No commenting on that one from me....and Tricks...to hypnotize one with words of poetry so deeply that they do not know how to exist without them...I love the way you wrote this poem it's beautifully written i dunno why i just babble on everytime i read one of your poems but i just say what comes to me.....reading your poetry definately takes me to another place ..you write beautifully my friend keep em' coming i wanna read more...
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Re: Killing Force Of Five
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by venkat on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 01:50:54 AM AEST
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| Even if you get killing force of 5 you cant use against your nature. It will be useful only to save your skin. A variety poem beautifully written. enjoyed alot...Venkat |
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