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the cadella
Contributed by
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 12:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The Cadela
Put my
Dead dog
In a cave
She didnt
Arise
After three
Days.
Now she is
A skeleton
But she
Laments
Our parting
When moon
Is full.
She lives in
My Dreams
And I scold
Her not
When she
Steals
The cats food.
Copyright ©
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
... [
2002-12-28 00:20:00]
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Re: the cadella
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 12:57:19 AM AEST
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Jan i have to be honest with you, sometimes when i read your poetry it's very challenging for me to read....that to me says you write uniquely, your writings completely take me by surprise every time...thanks for sharing your poetry...i look forward to reading more...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.
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Re: the cadella
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by venkat on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 01:42:13 AM AEST
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Except reading I can't pass any comment. I can't say that a dead dog is unfit for a poem so long
as it occupies a place in yyour heart. Venkat. |
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