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When You Come My Way...
Contributed by
mina-1
on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 12:43:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I never thought it possible
I would love again
I thought I was bound
To sadness an eternity remain
You touched my heart
Like no man could
Making me feel emotions
I never knew I would
I hope and pray
The day will come
When you and I
Shall become one
If time had me wait
Just to be with you
I'd move the heaven and skies
For my love is true
I long to be in your arms
Loving each other forever
Growing old and gray
I hope we shall together
Believe in your dreams
For they may come true
One day in the future
Reality will have me with you...
Copyright ©
mina-1
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2005-05-06 00:43:08]
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Re: When You Come My Way...
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by venkat on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 12:50:18 AM AEST
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Ooh..lovely poem.."Loving each other forever
Growing old and gray"..thats what I am doing with my lady at home..God bless.. may your wishes come true as you hold true love towards your lover..:-) venkat
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Re: When You Come My Way...
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 12:51:55 AM AEST
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That is a very sweet and beautiful write.
keep penning. |
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Re: When You Come My Way...
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by loveisendless on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 01:56:06 AM AEST
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SO SWEET,& SO STRONG! YOU CAN MAKE A BELIEVER OUT OF ANYBODY!! BECUZ, YOU HAVE THE POWER IN THAT GREAT HEART OF YOURS!!! TO BAD THE WHOLE WORLD CAN'T READ YOUR POEMS,BECUZ IF THEY COULD,MAYBE THEY WOULD KNOW HOW TO USE SOMETHING CALLED-
LOVE!!!! KEEP EM' COMING BABY!!!!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!!! |
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Re: When You Come My Way...
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by iodinelove on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 02:16:13 AM AEST
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AWWW...I love you too ^_^
I love everybody.....heh...
anyway, good poem and all....gotta go...buh bye now ^_^
abraham |
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Re: When You Come My Way...
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by Sinned on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 04:53:39 AM AEST
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mina-1
very nice; wih your feelings expressed so well I'd be your b/friend in less than a second.
Beautiful tribute to your b/friend.
Sinned |
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Re: When You Come My Way...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 08:15:10 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem Sue!!! Expressed beautifully, I love it! I felt you on this .
Leia |
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Re: When You Come My Way...
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 08:16:35 AM AEST
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A treasure 2 behold such beautiful ppoetry . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: When You Come My Way...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 12:51:40 PM AEST
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awwwww very sweet!!
and I most definately beleive in dreams and wishes!
Great write! |
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Re: When You Come My Way...
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by sride686 on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 02:24:04 PM AEST
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| A great write from a great poet that I look to for inspiration through her work. This write has so much love and emotion and some great one liners that really stick in my head. I really like how you talked about growing old together. that’s what I look for in life someone I can be with tell the end. You had such a strong ending on this write that really left you in a high when you were done. So much love that was well felt and a great read. Thank you as always for sharing this love for all to read. A great work of art take care….your friend Steve |
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Re: When You Come My Way...
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 02:31:32 PM AEST
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Adorable and a wonderful poem Sue
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: When You Come My Way...
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 05:55:45 PM AEST
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Splendid statement of love and devotion. "This secret love's no secret, anymore." ((smiles)) This is a lovely poem expressed with sweetness and faith. Hope all works out.
Dove |
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Re: When You Come My Way...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 07:00:13 PM AEST
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This is beautiful, and heart warming, with a great flow. As always very nice job.
klia |
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Re: When You Come My Way...
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 05:41:34 PM AEST
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| Very romantic, from the heart. I really like the line; "I thought I was bound to sadness an eternity remain..." Wonderful, just a beautiful write that I can relate to....Scorp. |
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Re: When You Come My Way...
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by jmpy84 on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 05:36:54 PM AEST
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| what a beautiful poem |
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