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Kenia- (Elizabeth revised)
Contributed by
glu1
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Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 11:29:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Kenia, it is in vain i say Everything and anything i do Not for me, but for you In earnst of a kiss to steal Away from such prying eyes
I'd walk the Earth, forever and a day
Longing for your touch Over desert and ice and sea Vexed be the false prophets Everlasting, my love for thee
Yesterday's fears melt away Over the fire of today Under the heavens, i'll find you
For i cannot live without you On such a desolate rock Roaming the empty world Even when you're not there Verefied, by the pain i feel Ending at the horizon, of forever Release me
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Re: Kenia- (Elizabeth revised)
(User Rating: 1 ) by lostinmyself on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 12:35:01 PM AEST (User
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I love those first three parts,.
This is fantastic.
It is also very clever. I have seen many try this before, and many do not pull it off, but you do.
Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Kenia- (Elizabeth revised)
(User Rating: 1 ) by kpsniper2003 on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 10:12:43 AM AEST (User
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I enjoyed your poem very much |
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