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Soul On Fire!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 01:56:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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My heart is on Fire
to the point that the beating alone
feels like needles in my body.
The blood like razor blades
Ripping through my veins
The oxygen I breathe
Chokes my lungs
To the point where
Breathing alone is too much
Too much air and now
I am gasping for life while going insane
My soul drowing in a river
of emotions that run so deep
that even my mind gets lost
in the abyss of darkness with-in
my imagination; hell is what I gain
Im blind from the outside in
clouds forming around my eyes
tears running like acid down my cheeks
burning the flesh to the touch
as my hands try to wipe away the rain
My heart is on fire
and burns wild and enraged with the
love that has left me in this pool of
violent thoughts and pyschotic realizations
of the visions of what I've done
To truly realize all of this Pain!
Copyright ©
MajesticPoet
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Re: Soul On Fire!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 02:03:39 PM AEST
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I was logging out and I saw this and I just had to rush back in here and comment. Such a powerful *scream*!
I don't know what you've done either, but you write really well. I know I've been there half a dozen times in my life so far. So *hugs* because while they may not help, they sure can't hurt.
*hopes you can breathe soon*
J. |
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Re: Soul On Fire!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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by MajesticPoet on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 02:05:57 PM AEST
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| My soul is being tortured by the pain I am feeling. I lost something I held dear, then what I held dear was forever lost to me. The world can see her everyday, and the air can feel her body when it wants. I must now lurk in the shadows and fight this demon inside of me. My soul Burns! |
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Re: Soul On Fire!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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by sicknivesevered on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 02:06:04 PM AEST
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| Bravo, bravo! You, good sir, are one ***** off individual. The poem needs a little gloss, but I guess in all the raging who left it raw. Good ***** off rant though. |
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Re: Soul On Fire!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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by MajesticPoet on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 02:08:35 PM AEST
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| I have a good one I am gonna post once my 24hrs is up. lol. Should be soon I think. This one will be one humdinnger. lol |
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Re: Soul On Fire!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 02:23:32 PM AEST
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WOW! Brilliant write , very intense and exspressive. I really felt you on this , felt your agony and pain. someone is trying to take the most important thing in my life away from me and I really really understand.
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Re: Soul On Fire!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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by shelby on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 02:24:56 PM AEST
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this burned me with the feeling that was sent forth so emotional and intense once again a great job but Im sorry for the pain
Michelle |
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Re: Soul On Fire!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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by MajesticPoet on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 04:18:52 PM AEST
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| I have not done alot of angry poetry as I tried to subside those emotions, but now I am unleashing all that is inside. No more allwoing it to eat away at me. I am filled with alot of pain that is from the anger of being filled with pain. I am glad you all like this one. Check out my newest one. Just posted it about 3 mins ago. 1 more to go from my 3 in 24hrs. |
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