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SPIT IN MY FACE
Contributed by
jyssvw
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Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 03:12:38 PM in AEST
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I talked to her again today
First time in a year
The day she quite me
Was the exact moment I feared
Her voice sounded so calm
As if there was never anything wrong
As if she wasnt concerned
Of the matter for which I had called
She spoke like it was yesterday in june
For a split second I just assumed
She had been here with me all along
That she never left and this was just a dial-tone
She asked me how I was doing
I replied just fine and dandy
My emotions suddenly began brewing
Her voice sweet like chocolate candy
But, from the other room across the hall
A new voice I could barely discern
Then she told me about her new love
I fumbled and dropped the cordless phone
I had called her number unintentionally
A misdialed blunder, potentially
For a split second I hoped she would come back to me
Shes doing just fine now, apparently
As I sit here and reflect on each and every word
I dream of one more minute of her face
A beautiful girl,but she had no heart
This was also a beautiful Earth at the very start
Perhaps next year she may ring me accidentally
Maybe in a decade, she could finally break free
Or on a cool summers eve maybe in the next century
Ill answer my phone drunk in a bar in rural Kentucky
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jyssvw
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2005-05-06 15:12:38]
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Re: SPIT IN MY FACE
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by FleurdeSang on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 06:23:07 PM AEST
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I have no words for this... Flawless, beautiful, and heart-breaking... I'm sorry for you pain, my friend. All my love. Forever,
Your speechless and admiring friend,
Stephy. *more soon!* *hugs* |
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Re: SPIT IN MY FACE
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 08:39:19 PM AEST
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Jyss this is so sad!!! You need to move on though...It's been too long. If you stay looking to the past you may miss something worthy standing before you. This is such a stripped down, honest write, and it's heartbreaking to read.
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