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Down
Contributed by
daniel
on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
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when the lights dim down
and no one is around
the nights is ours
even if people are there
its not like i care
its still ours
when good times are made
best yet to be played
til the sun goes down
brighten up like the moon
and you'll be here soon
before the sun goes
down
when the sun goes
down
you'll be here with me
when the moonlight is up
and you are star struck
i know you're here
day was long and dreary
but i can see you clearly
in front right here
i know its one out of many
but that night is ours
its not just a night, not any
but for you and me, its ours
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daniel
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2002-12-28 09:00:00]
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Re: Down
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 09:22:49 AM AEST
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This is so beautifully written.... nice write!! :)
~Dani~ |
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Re: Down
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by OreO on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 01:50:09 PM AEST
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Awww Daniel i like you all gushy gooey, we all know who this one is about hehe...I love the way you wrote this one...your feelings and passion were flowing through your words here....thanks for sharing such a beautiful part of your life...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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