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I Do
Contributed by
remy
on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 11:50:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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well i don't suppose you want to hear this, right?
yes i put up a slight altercation on the situation.
no apology is coming from me for changing my mind.
forget it tonight while we party, are you listening?
stop and think about it minute, i wish you please!
there's no good excuse even with plenty of use.
there was never a lie though haphazard car keys.
it's no tease, i'm more devisive than indecisive.
here comes the truth like the back of a hand
i don't expect you to understand it.
a simple word there goes a kick to the can
another notch of presumed affidavits.
there yes i'll save my breath.
now watch we'll head out west.
i don't hope to convince you otherwise.
one more move and gone from your sight.
that's what you wanted, was it?
that would solve it, wouldn't it?
like i could help it
never mind forget it
here comes the truth like the front of a man
i don't expect you to understand me.
a simple word there goes a prick to the can
another notch carved in so blandly.
there yes i'll save this breath.
no watch i'll go home west.
it's best to think that this is what i wanted to
didn't think my choices would mean much i'm through
so any thought of reconnecting
on this last fling
please don't tell me
i don't want to think about it anymore...
don't mean to bore you...
but i do.
Copyright ©
remy
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2005-05-06 23:50:26]
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Re: I Do
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by Willofree on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 06:41:17 AM AEST
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Very interesting write, not sure I captured it all. But seems to be about conflict and ineffective communication over reoccuring issues, resulting in a split .....going seperate ways?
Unique style, good job
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Re: I Do
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by mina-1 on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 08:18:11 AM AEST
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A bittersweet write mixed with alot of emotion. Very well conveyed. I can feel ur pain in between the lines. A great write. Well done.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: I Do
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by bttrflynajar on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 11:53:18 AM AEST
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| i love the way you write, your words flow quite nicely... this poem is great! |
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