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Meant for You
Contributed by
sride686
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Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 08:46:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Love is fatal and can take your soul
It will take your life if you give it rule
But give it rule and it will set you free
In countless ways that you could only dream
For true love is secret but never hide
Its got a passion that will never subside
With true love your lies are told
Your secrets unleashed for them to hold
So Ill give you my love and Ill give you my soul
Now Ill give you my heart and Ill give you control
Forever will we love and forever will we dream
As Im lost in your love that was only meant for me
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sride686
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2005-05-07 08:46:08]
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Re: Meant for You
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 08:54:08 AM AEST
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Very nice poetry and testiment 2 ones love
nicely done . . . |
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Re: Meant for You
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 08:55:36 AM AEST
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words spoken in thruth of one's heart . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Meant for You
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by Kachina on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 12:57:08 PM AEST
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| Very nice and well spoken. |
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Re: Meant for You
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by In_a_while on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 01:01:56 PM AEST
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| I take my hat off to you, a very, very good job. You opened my eyes to a lot of what i could not see in love's truth, and life as well. A good piece of poetry should do that, this was one of them. Thanks for this great poem and your comments on mine as well, they're much appreciated. |
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Re: Meant for You
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by mina-1 on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 04:14:18 PM AEST
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Steve u never cease to amaze me with ur remarkable writing. I think my lovey dovey stuff is rubbing off on ya, lol. It is a delightful and pleasurable write. U capture it so well. It's good to see u write happy positive poems.
Divine as always my friend. A real heart warming poem that pulls all the strings of the heart. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem with us.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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